haha. i like vince the best, but mike is adorable too. i like that he gets so nervous that he stutters, that's too cute. anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing my stories! nothing special...is on an unofficial hiatus, i'll update it sometime, but not for a little bit. anyway, nice chapter, you could describe your characters a bit sure, because i'm unsure of how vince, mike, and some of the other's look, but otherwise, good job!

saying something is a piece of cake, is kind of sealing your doom, i think. it's like saying, well it can't get any worse, then it always gets worse.

The thing cut me off! I wrote so much more on your review so I'm gonna finish. Where did I leave off...Come on, you have to admit, I realy am a genius!

Hey hun! The reason why I haven't updated in a while is cuz I was on punishment...you know: no cell, no comp., no TV. I needed an "Attitude Agustment" or whatever. I don't start school till the 28th of August and I'll try and update soon.I love it! I love her friends and how they're so protective of her it's so cute!Things like:Yea, I have a pool! Awesome, no? aren't needed. She doesn't need to repeat she has a pool. Yeah, and the “O I have an Idea” thing. The problem is it becomes too…chatty. It’s like a one-on-one conversation with the reader instead of a story…unless you want it that way, then keep those things. I just suggest you don’t. Haha! I love vince! ““Thanks, Ben.” They smiled shyly at each other.” That’s so cute!Come on, you have to admit, I realy am a genius!

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Yes,there will be another story to go with W.Y.P.B.Y.F! I just wanted to make sure everybody understood their past, feelings etc. Well sorry this is supposed to be about your story. I like the overall story line. I think your main character Dee is really fun and lovable. So I was wondering is this story about her falling in love w/ someone or is it just about her life in general? I'm sorry this is so long, but I hope you continue to read my stories and review! I'm off to read some of Heavens Tears stories now!

Hey! this chapter was pretty fun with all the swimming and activities. (now I feel like swimming...)

I think you need to work on developing your characters and maybe try avoiding stereotypes. Like Wilson is the jock-jerk. I know there are guys like that, but somehow it would be nice to see that there are more to everyone that just what you see. Would also like to see you developing each character deeper also. And beneath all that fun and romance, I hope the characters will learn about something more than just love life but more of life itself. O.o am i actually making sense?

Well, I'm looking forward to seeing how your characters will turn out :)

oh and thanks for reviewing my story. I think it's really quite nonsensical lol...

hey chica, it's me! You know that review from a person called me? She's my friend J and she's awesome, she's alot better at giving advice than I am and she's a super good writer! When Are you gonna update? I'm getting anxious! )

good beginning. Dee is a bit crazy though, i like it, but yeah... anyway, good job.

I really like your frist two chapters, its a good beginning. The only thing that i would tell you to work on would be in your characters. YOu have the basics of them now, but soon, or more as the story goes on i would just try to get into them a little bit more. Pick the main characters and give them all something different. Families, looks, likes, flaws. MAybe i'm just a character freak, but i think strong characters make a story a lot stronger. I'll keep reading, keep going.

O MY GOSH! Thank-you for portraying the a athletic girly-girl cuz that's exactly what I am! I have so many guys friends and we're able to talk about sports and stuff, but then I LOVE to shop and get my nails done and stuff like that, so thanx. I do think you need to change your title, it's too long, ir something. Um...WHERE'D JEREMY GO? I love him...lol. I love your story and I hate Wilson gr. Anyway, I think you should update with a new chapter once every week it gives people more time to catch up and stuff if you know what I mean. I try and space it out between every week, but sometimes I make the mistake of taking wayy longer than a week. But do what you feel, I'd just wait longer than one day. loves,((heaven's tears))

I know I've already read this story but I wanted to take more time because before I was in a hurry so I didn't have a enough time to give you suggestions. You've improved alot since Enough Said. You describe alot more, and there's way more voice in your main character which makes her more likable. For a tomboy, Dee (by the way I love that name)seems to be a little to flirty with the boys you know? She should probably see them more as friends, kinda like if you were sraight you wouldn't flirt with you're girl best friend. But I can't wait for the next chappie! Gosh I missed you, you were like my review buddy or someting lol. Well, MAKE SURE you continue this one okay, and I don't get ur title, but I probably will later on in the story. uh...Jeremy's a flippn' hottie, and I like Dee alot! You're right she is like Robbie. Anyway, Beautious! Update soon!Peace, Love, & Chicken Grease,Heaven's Tearsp.s. I'm thinking of changing my penname, what should it be?

I really like this story and it's about time you came back! Gosh, what took you so long? I wish you had finished your other story first though...oh well! Don't leave for 1,0,0,0 years in the middle of this story okay?