Reviews for Best Friends, Boy Toys, and Coffee Addictions
queenhalloween chapter 12 . 11/24/2008
Thanks! Yes, your singing is very beautiful... [*mutter* Oh, when will it end?] Hahaha. 'Kidding! But I feel so special.

I think it's sort of ironic and funny at the same time that writer's base off moments of real life in their stories. It's awesome. I do the same.

But wow, you were really descriptive of the crowded scene and the screaming, rabid girls. Crazy in there! I think that's why I'll probably never go to one even if I'm dragged against my will. :] Hahaha. Ack! But Lucy is cute as always. In my mind, when I picture him, he's glowing like some kind of faerie-prince with white-blonde hair, so tall and grand and majestic. Wow. I think I've been daydreaming too much in Algebra... :]
ArticulateParticulate chapter 12 . 11/24/2008
oh. .. faeries! fun!

I'm practically obsessed with fearies and vampires and shadow hunters and demons and warlocks and witches and soceresses. .. .and.. .. well .. .anything mystical. ...

but if you really like fearies then you should read this book -

Midnight Never Comes

. .. its hopeless , its romantic, its about fearies.. .. ! and its like a historical fantasy...about the time when Queen Elizabeth I was ruling over England.. ..

But its way cool !

OH great chapter BTW.. a hopeless romantic too .. ..(in my writing that is. In real life . ... not so much.. . .)
queenhalloween chapter 11 . 11/17/2008
Haha. Love the nickname! I really enoyed this chappy. But this chapter definitely cleared up some things. Like Rae finally found some one! Whoo! And thank god dear, beloved, sweet Lucy isn't abusive. I read that in the answer you gave to Yours Truly-Derranged Pixies. I had thought the same thing too but I was hoping it wasn't true. Phew. And how can I give you tips on your writing style? I think you have to discover it on your own. But that's just me... Sorry. Good luck though!
ArticulateParticulate chapter 11 . 11/16/2008
Great chapter!

Umm.. .. I have a habbit of letting my imagination run wild so I guess I just jumped to conclusions in that previous review.. ..:P I'm still on that stage where everything is black or whote .. .. you know ? No greys exactly.. ..

Anyway, I think your wirting style is great. It doesn't give too much away of the story and conveys exactly what we should know at the right time.. ..

So in other words, don't change a thing about your writing !

ArticulateParticulate chapter 10 . 10/23/2008
I just loved this chapter. .. I kind figured that guy was gonna be one of Luce's friends. .. !:D

Im glad you appreciated that review.. ..

I jus wanna say that its really easy to get into the psyche of people . .. all you have to do is put yourself in their shoes and do the most cowardly thing you could do. .. ..

Why do I ahve a feeling Luce is gonna hurt her physically ?

anyways/.. .. awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one. ... !
Rae chapter 10 . 10/23/2008
I love your story...I know you already know that, but I'm telling you again. Like I always do.

I expect a new chapter to be up tomorrow. P

And I will definitely join you in the dancing extravaganza. You just need enough reviews.

I might have to start posting reviews on every chapter just for that. )

But anyways. Nice work. Update soon! D

~The real Rae.
queenhalloween chapter 10 . 10/22/2008
Sean? *Gasp!* OMG! *jumps up and down* OMG! I know who that is, I freakin' know!

Hahaha. I THINK I do. *teary-eyed* I feel so proud of myself. Awesome chapter. Like always. Seriously, I love your writing. I've actually become much fonder of first-person but I love how you use third-person. You still state the character's feelings so they feel more... alive. :] I can almost sense the drama coming on. Haha. And Luce is starting to scare me since Izzy's friends are putting a lot of emphasis that they don't like Luce...

Either way, the story is wonderful and don't push yourself just for your readers. :] Let yourself be inspired,'kay? Ciao.
queenhalloween chapter 9 . 10/10/2008
I nearly fainted of the emotion. Oh. LOL I really loved this chapter. Seriously. Maybe because Owen and Isabelle have finally talked after some time. Either way, awesome story, PC!

Must review, people!

E. Collins chapter 8 . 10/10/2008
This is really good! I like it alot and hope to have time to finish reading it. :)


Roselyn Flores
ArticulateParticulate chapter 9 . 10/10/2008
Hey, I just read your story and I think its really nice!

The fact that your characters are shallow is the beauty of the whole thing because that's how friends actually are in real life.. .. people are SHALLOW.. ..

They remind me a lot of my friends and I. . .

I totally get the whole high on cafene and mountain dew thing!

Pls update !
queenhalloween chapter 7 . 7/6/2008
Ah, the constant flirting... Haha. The funniness of it. Oh, look, I just invented a word! But yes, Lucy can be a playful jerk (Yes, I nicknamed hum Lucy). I like him. And you left it at a semi-cliffhanger! Ugh. :]
boredbottom chapter 7 . 7/1/2008
The surprise her gave her wasn't what I expected. hehe evne thogh this chapter wasn't as long as the last one I liked it ! it showed their relationship with each other ...

queenhalloween chapter 6 . 6/20/2008
Amazing chapter. Had me giggling. :] Great work.

Sorry for my late answer. I actually think I died and came back to life but my computer's fixed. That's good, right? Now I can answer without disturbances.
boredbottom chapter 6 . 6/19/2008
yayayayay! the chapter has come at last! why does evrey author always leave readers wondering.. (Sigh) gr!


Ill be uh-way-tee-ing
boredbottom chapter 5 . 5/28/2008
what! Luce lives next door..o theres going to be some D-R_A-M-A!






ill be here waiting
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