Reviews for Better Off This Way
Noir Fleurir chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
I like this one too :) Keep it up! heh not like i need to tell you
Nathan Ridge chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
if you're asking if I'm better off without you, than the answer is no because you are a highly welcomed reviewer. if you're wondering if you're corrupting my world, then no. I've corrupted it far more than you ever will. _ i like it. it's short sweet and to the point
Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Short and simple as you put. But nice too. It doesn't exactly carry the emotions told within it, but tells them divinely in short sweet words.
Willow Wildfire chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
Ah.. damn. Nice piece you got here, I write poetry myself on , and I really enjoyed reading this. Also, I wanted to say thank you for reading a poem of mine, you said you'd be happy to read the story when it came out, ) thanks, well the story is up. Two are actually, they're both about the same charcacters (penname) Kimar, and TempusTooShort, are writing about, I hope you check them out, I'd love to know what you think!Anyways, this poem's got some deep emotion and insecurity in it, I wanted to say doubt but I'm not sure... It's really good!Take Wildfire
criti-sized chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
This was a very nice poem. I liked how you expressed everything in so little words, it was beautiful.

Also thanks for the reviewCriti-sized
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
I like the italic thingy a lot
Expression07 chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
I love it. and i like the effect the italicized words give.