|Reviews for X: The Beginning|
| MasteroftheGuild chapter 10 . 9/2/2006
sorry to take so long reviewing, ive been away for a while. excellent story dude, cant wait for more!
| OMG H4X chapter 10 . 8/15/2006
tihs wsa not a stry to rmembre n00b lol u suxor n00b
ps jus dun riht gabrge liek tihs agian n00b
| Tower of Babel chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
Interesting, however, you may want to have an editor read this for the grammatical errors I found. Your attention grabber about 'the bomb' is intriguing and I'll read the other chapters, but, it would be good if you explained more about WW3 and its applications, how it affected the world, etc. Maybe I'm jumping the gun...
| MasteroftheGuild chapter 7 . 7/29/2006
short but sweet. keep it up!
| MasteroftheGuild chapter 6 . 7/24/2006
Sweet, sorry to keep you waiting...
excellent story, man, top-notch stuff indeed. Xavier's mother's reaction seems a lot like my mother, actually... good work, man!
| MasteroftheGuild chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
good story, but im guessing this is just the setup, right? this is a very interesting idea, ill keep an eye on this one!