|Reviews for DOT|
| Transmundane1456 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
I like the story plot, it's very more detail though
| Pixilated chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
This is trully an interesting story. Simple-yet, really funny. I love the plot... and I wish you would update... is a great story.. and it has potential. I hope you do update I'll be waiting.
| TwinkleHeart chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
hehe seems interesting already imw aiting for next chapter D
| hellohellolove chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Hilarious. I love it. Very realistic. Update Soon!
| SolisLuna chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
MUWAHAHAHAHHAHAAHHAHAHA! (insert evil stance here) I absolutely LOVED it! Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Romance advise: Don't make your characters fall in love quickly, slowly is usually better.
Oh, check out my story Ash To Riches! Lol, Please?
| Callisto Jean chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Cute story!I like her name!
| WickedRedHead chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Omg, lmao! That just reminded me so much of my friends... i love it! Please update soon, def going into favorite stories.
| blaah chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Haha! Sounds soo like my friends and me. Especially when they started naming off their kids. What IS it with girl's and doing that? Haha, I love it so far! Keep it up!