Reviews for the house on stilts
Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
What's this crap about "not original" and "not good." Whatever! It's fantastic! You seem to have a penchant for imagery or, at the very least, descriptions. And the emotion in your poems is very subtle and unobtrusive; it kind of just sneaks up on the reader that there was emotion there to beging with. It's an exciting thing to have emotion in a poem sneak up on you! And those last three line were fantastic! You give yourself too little credit. Keep it up.

The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Wow. That's all I can really say...
With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
You've got good style. I like how your poem flows like prose. Ah, poetry. Yes, you rhyme very nicely and inconspicuously. I'm pretty sure the poem's meaning is over my head. But I can assess that it's good, it's original, and your vocabulary and style do not falter throughout. Nice job.