Reviews for Seventeen
yodel a blue streak chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
This is amazing, so real. I love it.
Raiyune chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Absolutely amazing. Well formatted. Well written. Well expressed. Like something I'd expect to see in one of my favorite collections.. Just... perfect. It's perfect poetry.

Oh, seventeen. What a troubled age..
i am pookie chapter 1 . 7/17/2006

I feel like you caught all the seventeen year olds in your poetic net and placed them on this page. Being seventeen I COMPLETELY agree with this and chuckle at the end with 'Driving at night/ Without headlights' because I ALWAYS forget to put my headlights on.

Really wonderful-the cramped style only adds to the effect of the poem, how at seventeen you live for yourself with your dreams and ideas and no one else's. At seventeen you have so many dreams yet don't know what you want. So it's perfect that it's cramped-our minds are cramped with everything we want.