Reviews for Inseparable: What You Can Be To Me
haylE15 chapter 30 . 9/5/2016
I really liked your story! The summary was really cool but after reading a few chapter I was afraid this would be too "simple"...and I'm glad it wasn't!
But basically Ashley told Lizzie she loved her but Lizzie never said it back? (The "I love you guys" doesn't count)
And Jocelyn wasn't completely honest. She said she wanted to go on the next level with Jason once. Don't get me wrong, this scumbag deserves what it got and I get that it was better not telling that to the judge but it is a fact.
Are there really mothers like Lizzy's out there? This woman was the real monster in this story.
Thanks for sharing this with us! I noticed a few typo but since I read it at night in my bed, I was just too lazy to note them, forgive me?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/20/2016
13 and 18? That's statutory rape. First of all, I wish my little sister comes to me when she's 13 and tell me she has a boyfriend, let alone an 18 year old one. Gosh, I swear.
breakthehabit chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
not logged in Seems like my second time reading this, I kinda remember. :P Just noticed that Ashley Benson is an actress. :P I've recently started watching PLL.. :D
breakthehabit chapter 30 . 9/28/2012
Yayy for a happy ending! :D Thank you so much for writing it! I was a fun read. Hope to see you more in the future! :D
breakthehabit chapter 20 . 9/28/2012
Yeah! Total ownage. :D
breakthehabit chapter 15 . 9/28/2012
breakthehabit chapter 14 . 9/28/2012
Wow. Nice Mom.
breakthehabit chapter 12 . 9/28/2012
Yay, I guessed right! :P I knew you were Lizzie. :D Just a feelin. :P
breakthehabit chapter 8 . 9/28/2012
Why didn't they tell their best friends that they already knew each other? :P Sorry if this sentence is confusing. xD
breakthehabit chapter 5 . 9/28/2012
Ah, I see how it is. It's going to be like "intertwined destiny" or something like that, right? :P
breakthehabit chapter 4 . 9/28/2012
I knew Rylie was Lizzie's friend. :P I wonder how old these guys are considering Liz's lil sister is dating a 18 yrs old dude? o_O
breakthehabit chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
I like the story so far, everything's pretty dang awesome. But now I eat and read so no more reviews for a bit. :P Too captivating to stop.
JDKlaus chapter 30 . 2/20/2012
An absolutely fantastic story, was sad it ended so soon.
ash-05 chapter 3 . 2/20/2012
I'm so in love with your story!...

It was really nice.. no, It's AWESOME!


BlazingSpirit1984 chapter 30 . 4/17/2011
Awesome story I loved it.
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