(Currently crying) AHHRGH! THE ROMANCE IS KILLING ME!

funniest chapter ever. NU! WHAT ARE YOU WAITING? GO AFTER THEM?

REALLY? A BOOK? I WANT ONE!

YOU UPDATED! -tacklehugs- YAAYY! Loved the mudfight. XD!

gah. omg this is so freaking dam good i love it love it love it love it LOVE IT! lol. the descriptions and characters are just amazing!

Congrats on getting published! A great feat, since many of the people that I know rarely have that happen. Though, I do find that your writing is very well done. Those who don't publish you should be ashamed! Haha.

I did realize that it was an edited version of your original story. I suppose the book will be somewhat like this one on FictionPress? It makes sense, since this one is much more book-like (rather than a story for the sake of writing... you can tell how much your techniques have improved, merely by reading both versions).

Thank you for replying to my review, by the way! That means alot to me, to tell you the truth. I'd be very grateful if you did email me with the details of your book, just so that I can know where to buy it/order it.

As for constructive criticism this time around though, I don't have much. This chapter seemed very well put together, although I would have liked to see a bit more detail and description. It might just be me, but I do remember somewhat of a more descriptive shot when I read the first version. Of course, my imagination could have just been running away with me that time.

Also, I'm not sure if you noticed, but your thoughts aren't italicized. I'm not sure if you meant to do that, but I thought I'd let you know this time. It makes for a rather confused read.

Anyway, keep up with it. I love to read this version!

Nice change, adding in that bit about the compass, it makes more sense than the version on your website. Coolio!

Nice! LOL, I actually laughed out loud during this chapter. I love Crash's character, he's so... I dunno, gives me the shivers.

Wow this story is so cool, I'm really enjoying it so far! I was a bit iffy at first but it's really turning out great. Keep up the good work!

This story is awesome! I'm so gonna keep reading this! :D

~Mizz Neko

you are AMAZING! i love ur story and i think ur writing skills are brilliant. so how many more chapters are going to write. please update soon!

I remember finding this story some time ago and reading all of it in only one night, simply because I just couldn't stop. The story was so imaginative and powerful and absolutely lovable! And when I finished, I felt sad and happy at the same time, sad because it was over, and happy because of the almost happy ending!

And now merely a few days ago, I stumbled upon this very same story once again, and I felt the very same effects. This story made me cry and smile. A story that could capture my attentions and emotions so completely deserves to be published. I know you talked about publishing it, although I don't know if you have done so already. If you have, email me so that I can buy it! I simply adore this story!

The moments between Crash and Sora were my absolute favorites. The romance between them is so realistic, and I like how it slowly built up to the climax. However, I do think the very climax of this story, at the end, is a little abrupt. But i'm not really complaining.

I like reading this story on your website rather than here. You seem to have added much more detail to that one instead of the one in Fictionpress.

Once again, I like to mention how much I love your story. You did a really, really wonderful job!

Hello, just found this story and I must say I really like the storyline you've got here. It was a nice twist, making the Healer Sora's mother. And I like the races you have create. I'm sorry that this is such a short review, but it's past 11 p.m. and my brain functions slow down at this time of night, unless there is lots of caffeine, and unfortunately that caffeine fixture is currently unavailable to me. But I really enjoyed this story, and will be looking forward to the next update which will hopefully be soon!

uh im confuzzled. it says that this is finished on ur profile. is this a revised version of the story? anyway, ur not updating...WHY?

And this is where random searching for your favourite stories gets you to. :D

Anyway, hello! I'd just like to say that this is one of the best stories that I've read in a long time. I actually came across Cat's Eye on your website (for the life of me, I can't remember who directed me there...) quite a while ago, and became absoloutely enamoured with it. It's very good, and very imaginative. Makes me smile every time I read it (which I do quite often... not to sound weird or anything).

But yes, either way I was wondering if you're simply posting the whole story over here on Fiction Press, or if it's a revised version of the story? I've yet to actually go over it... *sheepish grin* But trust me, I will! Haha. That is, if I can get through all of my studying... Exams are the shiz. And not in a good way.

Sweet deal though. I sincerely do hope that you get published one day; I would definitely be one of the buyers of the book. I wish you luck in that area. Can't wait for the next update. Hopefully I'll have more constructive criticism then, instead of just random babbling like this one ended up to be. lol.

-Krista.

haha its me again, i just read your bio and my question has been answered!hahah

Hi! I din't think that you had an account here still! i was so surprised! anyways, is this posting of cat's a more edited version compared to the one on your site? hmm yeah im still gonna read it again, cuase you know this is my favourite of all time! haha yah

WRITE ON!