I loved this one! It was so touching. I could see what was happening as you said them, and I could she a mother and daughter remembering a lost father. This is going into my favorites!

~Rébecca

Vague, meaningless, & utterly disinteresting & worthless to a reader.

Come on,- "memories of last September" & "he died"; "he" being who? Who is "she"? What memories? What's the relevance of September?

The dialogue is unrealistic, esp. since you provide no justification for "she" to phrase such a statement so oddly.

AMAZING! It says SO much with so few words. A favorite, hands down. Incredible.