Reviews for Mirrors
Maria Courtiarre chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Bittersweet, and sad but I like it
Kavita Najim chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
It's heartbreaking how love blinds you. This is reality blended perfectly with insanity!

Thanks for the review, Jess
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
The contradiction works well in this. Shows the interactions of relationships accurately. Very relatable. Well done.
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Cool.
GERGE chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
Beatiful word the fifth line somewhat sounds out of place.'Enlightens' after 'which' or more close to the point 'tens' after 'ch'.I think soft words after heavy ones kills the rhytme of a poem(It maybe because of my pronouncing). Poems idea is a aestetic one.
Raspberry Twirl chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
wow, this poem had such a strong, yet delicate and dream-like touch to it. Okay, that sounds weird. what i mean is that the power and purpose of this poem is filled with strength, yet you feed your reader with soft and gentle words. Very nice. It paints a clear, sad picture in my mind. Keep up the colorful work, Raspberry Twirl.

p.s. thank you for your review!
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
oo! i like this one. it has a spevial quality to it... nice

Liz
duckmaster chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
"with eyes like glass mirrors" What a quote that can mean so much. That she can really see that love is never forever. I liked the poem.

-duckmaster
ktoddhim chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Oo good one!

All of them are.

Katy
Lucid Nonsense chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
Interesting, nicely done.
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
About the reflections and refractions of human lies?

Very nice.

Keep writing

Alan.