Reviews for forgiveness
Eirien chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Wonderful. The whole story of redemption packed in such a few words. Very dense in wonderful imagery. Your poetry is amazing. Sorry I haven't reviewed for such a long time, I hope to be more active on FP again.
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
im reviewing it again ( from )(im fluffysmarts)... i like it! :)~Liz
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
Wow, this is stunning. YOU ROCK!
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
Truly vivid and thought provoking. You have a marvelous sincerity and succintness that roams through your haiku's. Always an enjoyable read.
quazetcoatlus chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
The haiku is very exquisite and such and the wording is perfect.

bahaghari, are you filipino?

bahaghari means rainbow.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
I read this twice and enjoyed it much more the second time. Fantastic word use, great imagery but more of all it was emotive. Great tanka.

Peace, Daze
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
Great allusions wrapped in a poem.
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
i love the format and the emphasis.

a short evocative piece, vivid imagery.

nice work.