|Reviews for The Other World|
| ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
This story is awesome, you've got a strong grasp of discriptives and has a lot of pace.
This is excellent - Your First? Oh well, it's light years ahead for a first work of fiction. Personally, I never even dared to put my first up, you can imagine that it's really quite bad... ;o)