this is amazing.

i can feel the tension.

gorgeous, please, yes, let's see where this takes us!

Another great chapter! It's good that they're short too, gives me a chance to read them, plus, it adds more anticipation.

I really love these characters. They're so original. I've never read characters so unique and intreguing in any story on here yet. If I was a male, I would want to impress Audrey too!

Great job! Keep up!

good start. work on longer chapters. its ok if it means larger spaces of time between updates. its worth the wait.

Again I'm amazed at the details put into this. And don't worry about being a slow writer, just don't give up on the story. You've got talent P

Wow, it really is short. I hope you have more soon. I don't even like reading stories on here, but I love yours, so that's really saying something. Definetly keep going with it. I love the characters, and I'm really intregued to see what happens to them.

Short but sweet. And very romantic. A walk in the rain? Sexy.

liking this story alot, i just wish they were longer chapters...hint hint

keep this going, it's got great potential. its sweet and pleasantly put together.

oh see where it takes you. thats really cute :) i like it

Wow. I'd love to see where you take this. I like it a lot. The descriptions were great. I love how you've described Daniel and Audrey. I think I can almost tell what kind of people they'll be already. I'm really interested in reading more!

very good i like ita nice little shopsarbucks is such a nice place so warm and snug m!keep it up!

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KEEP GOING! I really, REALLY want to see where you take this.

I think you should run with it. I love the line, "What if you met someone...?" Nicely written.