|Reviews for In Your Head|
| Camilleta chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
| bR0k3N chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
i like this... flowed reall nice! really good!
| Farran chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
The speed and rythem are good broken a little unfortunatly by the sevnth line in my opinion. But it quickly recovers its fast pace in the next line so thats good. I really think this pice flows well throuoght apart from the above bringing us quickly to the abrupt conclusion amasing work well done!
| Basara chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Melancholic...nice...that's what my dominant trait by the way...heh...
| kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
Very good. Sad, but good writing.
| braindead1345 chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
This is a really good piece,it sounds like a good metal song,is it? I really like the end;you never did... its said with such finallity,that you cant help up think its true.
| ladybugpoet chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
funny.. this is exactly how i felt my freshmen year of high school.. read my older poems you will see... things do get better.. (im heading OFF to college in one month :-) ) as for the poem i love it.. its a give and take.. pushing forward on the right words.. you are a wonderful poet hard to believe you are 13... never stop writing