Reviews for Wish
LuckyCharm.698 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Strong opinion and idea but the rhythms kind of off. i enjoyed it though!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
I like a lot of parts of this, but I dont think it flows well together.. the wish thing & the mother thing dont relaly go together in my mind.. adn the ending about being beautifully ugly is amazing but comes out of nowhere... I think the different parts need more of a easing into them.. or maybe make them into separate pieces? ::Shrug:: jsut my opinion.. I do really like it though...