Reviews for Breaking Point
smoke another grin chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
wow. I have run out of words. Maybe I'll just read the rest.
mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Interesting concept. Beautifully written. Wonderful work.


[I apologize for the vague-ness. I'm feeling a little out of it.]
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
wow! its great! i love it!~Liz
My New Pen Name chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
Really raw and sad, excellent descriptions. I love dark poems like work.
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
Really like the poem overall.. especially the ending. True in a sad way.

"I’ll have the #2 with a side of suicide, please." Love that
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
I’m going through and reviewing some of the work of the people who have listed me as a favorite author, as a small way of saying thank you. So here’s your thank-you review!

I really enjoyed reading this piece. The formatting in this piece is very effective. Every bit of it really adds to the poem. I especially liked the effect of “break / ing”. I really love the diction in this piece. My favorite lines were, “they can only choose the slow simmer of alcohol in their veins because/ they don’t know any other way.” I love the cool cynicism expressed there. Keep up the good work!
t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Wow, marvelous concept, and I love the plays on words so to speak. Amazing job!