|Reviews for An Ancient Evil|
| Safekht chapter 2 . 7/22/2006
Aha, yes, one of my fanfiction writers here on FictionPress. I knew you were here, I just didn't believe that you were active. Thanks for proving me wrong.
You might want to be more consistent with the level of content in each chapter. Part 1 is a nice size, but Part 2 is... generously shorter. Why? Any meaning in that? Probably not. Anyway, that seems like my only complaint.
| Ashley Rei chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
This is so realistic and so creepy. I love the mood you've set.
A bit more of imagery would help, but its great. That last touch of 'whiter than silk sheets' was perfect.
You prefer male leads? I like the names you choose for them. Not a lot of people realize not everyone is named Bob, Tim, Jim, Joe or whatever common name I keep reading about.