Reviews for We're not together
KSDM1985 chapter 4 . 7/24/2006
Very well done hun, but whats going on? what happened to ur long chapters i miss them :-( lol just kidding. Great dialoug as well as story line. Keep up the good work i look forward to the next chapter, update soon please. pretty please
xGlowingAngelx chapter 4 . 7/24/2006
This is really good. I love the way he raced to the hospital, I thought it was very sweet. Keep it up :)
Nathanlvr chapter 3 . 7/23/2006
Is it hard to talk about because that would mean facing your feelings for that person.. and if you face your feelings than you have a chance at getting hurt. I think her room mate should do some work here.. mel goes all ben and jerrys-sitting on the couch watching a walk to remember-not shaving her legs-not going to work.. a full out mope fest her roomie will come in and talk to her about things with jared.. and two things can happen..1) She can denie her feelings but they will arise once again when he gets a gf and she will get SUPER jelous 2) She will think about what she says goes to sleep has a dream with them as a family and come to a realization but she cant tell him because she doesnt want to ruen the friendship if he doesnt feel the same way... HI btw I hope you dont mind that I tell you my ideas because I do it all the time.. alot of authors say it helps and brings new perspective on what they are writing.. Cant wait for the update
chris chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
So I forgot my login deets for the moment... so cant review signed!

Just read the first chapter and will definitely be back to read the rest... when time isnt so short!

Saw your msg about updating my stories... and I will! Just time is short... wait, I said that already, yes?

Woe is me, to be in France with so much to do! Catchya when I get home!

Oh, and I like ;)
Xo LoVeYa4eva Ox chapter 3 . 7/23/2006
very good!keep it up!
Ms.Romantic chapter 2 . 7/21/2006
craZehGurL chapter 2 . 7/21/2006
Very awesome second chapter. I'm loving this story and I can't wait to read more.
KSDM1985 chapter 2 . 7/21/2006
Hey, Great chapter, you captured the weird morning after effect really well. I love this story already. Keep up the good work i now its going to be a great story.
Daydreamer-angel chapter 2 . 7/21/2006
good example of ken doll , gd update
Ninny Poo chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Hi EvE,I Just love reading your novels. But i had to wait 3 years to read this one :) I think that this novel is going to better than the others. Its off to a good start already.
KSDM1985 chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Great work, its amazing what alcohol does to cloud your jugdement. I cant wait to find out what is installed for these characters the morning after. Update soon please
craZehGurL chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Wow, beautifully executed chapter. Is there more?
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