Reviews for 6 inches down
lookingwest chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
this is the best poem i've read all night, i love the imagery of this man and part three is my favorite. i'm going to add it to my favorite story list:D
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
The details are simply amazing.

Oh, and the imagery is amazing and.

Oh, dear Lord Jesus, you make cigarettes the hottest thing since . . . well, I can't really think what would be hotter looking than that - because you write it eloquently and express it in such a natural tone without adding in the "health/unhealthy" views.


And, I am smitten with this line: "he has hell between his fingers and he knows"

OhMYGOD,fabulous - it still wouldn't be enough to describe how utterly breathtaking that line is and just how much I love it and sincerely adore this poem.

You must write more. Like, now.

~* Noelle
Feathered Fiends chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
amazing...i loved the detail and the metaphors...definitely one of the better poems i've seen on this site.