Reviews for O Desolate Desperation!
heyitsstupidme chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
A good poem. It was a message to the readers, an emotional one, and that's what I really like about it. When I read it, the exclamation marks were very conspicuous. I think that made it more insistent.
Someone-Whos-Not-Important chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Is this about abortion? I thought it was sad and true. If it is about a miscarage than I know what you mean. My mother and sister-in-law had a miscarage. Sad stuff.

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sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Very depressing.. You are a good writer though, it was just very depressing. :(

sarah
darlantan chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
I like this. The content seems to imply chaos, but the form gives a structure to the chaos. In the first read through the alliteration seemed to jar the rhythm, but when I read through it again with the structure in mind, it fit better with the content. Excellent poem, I wouldn't change a thing!