Reviews for Time and Fate
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
creative. i kinda like this.

the rhythm and rhyme of the piece was well done.

good work. )
Elizabeth Sharp chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
I really like it... You pant a cool picture. VEry good word flow. Paul Simon would be proud! :D
tearing hands chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
Wow. The rythm in this is absolutely stunning. You make rhyming seem so easy. It reminds me a little of a little kids' nursery rhyme, but with deeper meaning. Amazing.
gardenofwords chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
I love this! It flows beautifully. D
Nathron chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Of course, my very favoritest poem evver! yep yep, your amazing. I want more poems! -chuckles greadily- muahaha...

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jk. Kudos! :-)
SV chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Haha, I like the flow of it. You might want to add on some more, cuz there's definitely room for it.