|Reviews for Burden|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Oh I do love this. I enjoy your style of writing so much.
| Afan chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
That was just awesome!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
this one does remind me of my forced mating... but cleaner? i liked it great job!
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
*likes* thanks for sharing. perfect little one shot.
| YawnieBug chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
This is a favorite of mine. :) You always write the best slash shorts. Kudos to you! :D
| the Berserker chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
this is the third of your stories that i've commented on. i want to read more but it's half past 11pm so i can't. damnit.
love your stories so much! you always have abnormal characters. it's unique. that rules. -
| forevdpressd chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
*sniff* Damnit, I cried. I loved it, and it actually made tears run down my cheeks. I had to go back and reread a couple times because they distracted me.
Brun is younger than Lan, right? For the whole half of the story, I thought that he was older. That threw me off a little, but I don't really mind.
| Mya chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
*had indeed read this before* But it was so much better than i remember . I was sad when the previous Gana died, she was awesome! And it could be considered fairy-tale-ish
| Holiday chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
This was good, as are all of your stories. I just wanted to comment on the time skipping thing and say that despite the jumps it was still easy to follow (unlike a lot of stories where you lose a few months and you're just confused for half the story cause you haven't figured it out, heh).
| AppLEaves chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Who cares! I love you fairytales! Especially when they always make me cry. This is getting rather bothersome...
They were so in love, and so oblivious... sigh... I never understand how you can make figments of your imagination become so... endearing..
But anyway, I love Wolf too! That cute little furball.. hehe.
| turtledonkey27 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
loved it :) for some reason i really enjoy the stories you've written like this, okay well, the one other story like this. they're just so different, much less dark...i don't know, they're just more interesting somehow.
| Viewtiful Chao chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
A rather nice shift from the more common fics of it's type.
| Naomi Schemer chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
The time jumps weren't confusing at all, as a matter of fact. Usually they are for me, but this time they weren't. I really like this story...the way Lan overcomed his blindness thanks to Brun, the way he managed to become a man despte everything, getting mated and then un-mated, both ways so peacefully. It's great, really. I really like Brea, too. She's a very strong female character. A bit of an archetype, but one you don't see around often enough in slash fiction. Thank you so much for this. I liked it allot.