|Reviews for Brown Eyes|
| angel1818 chapter 29 . 4/30/2013
I realise that the story is possibly about accepting, letting go and moving on...but I am desperately hoping that Dante and Cassidy end up together. I can't seem to accept that Dante's love for Laurita could prevail over what he had with Cassidy...it appears so unfair with the way Laurita pulled him in.
As you can see I'm very into the story and almost feel that the characters are out there somewhere in the real world. I have enjoyed most of your stories and hope that the next update will be very soon.
P.S (I do hope that Dante and Cassidy still only have eyes for each other)!
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 29 . 4/24/2013
Update soon! You are too hard on yourself, because you really are a talented writer.
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 24 . 4/21/2013
Your writing reminds me a lot of Sarah Dessen. She's a really talented cliche writer, like you.
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 21 . 4/18/2013
| Amazing Fuzzy Llamas chapter 29 . 4/18/2013
I love this so much! My FAVORITE! 3 Please continue writing! I love how Dante loves both Cassidy and Laurita, and how you can identify with Laurita's feelings easily. Awesome!
| BananaPhobia chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
This is just simply amazing. I love your writing style! Can't wait to see more.
| it'syouandme chapter 29 . 4/9/2013
ahaha i have no difficulty picturing cassidy being so deadpan about sex! this was an amazing chapter. i loved the drama-especially the jealousy on dante's part!
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 11 . 4/6/2013
Great story! You're characters are really developed and you have a really good story line going here!
| SRS chapter 29 . 3/29/2013
| starlight91 chapter 29 . 3/29/2013
This is not my first time reading this chapter, but I finally got around to reviewing! Cheers!
Anyway, the story is wayyyy too intense. Gives me a heart attack all the time. Dante and Cassidy...just... I don't even know. They so obviously care for each other, and I wish there was a better way for them to show that than outright hostility. And Laurita...oh god...another one of the many barriers between Dante and Cassidy. Although I am a bit confused with the plot, I think things will start to clear up as more chapters get uploaded. SPEAKING OF WHICH, please update soooooon! I'm dying on the inside. All this drama is actually killing me!
| MrsHellman chapter 29 . 3/29/2013
This is really good and it is certainly something I don't stumble upon on a weekly basis here on FP. I like your flow and your characterisation. I don't think I've ever read a story where the main characters have such a past as Dante and Cassidy. Very well done, I hope to see more from you.
| CupsofTea chapter 29 . 3/27/2013
I introduced your story to my friend and I can say that we were both half way to tears after this chapter. At first I grudgingly liked Laurita and I'm going to be honest and say that I'm happy to have a reason to dislike her now. I don't know what else to say other than I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the ensuing drama! xx C.T
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
Great story! I really want to know what happened between Dante and Cassidy. I have a feeling that there is more to the story.
| Hop3lesS-Romantic-GirL chapter 29 . 3/26/2013
I can seriously not wait for the next chapter :))) please update soon! Such a gr8 story!
| KoriLee123 chapter 29 . 3/25/2013
More? Please? Pretty please with cherries on top?