Reviews for Brown Eyes
Choukou chapter 29 . 3/4/2013
Holy cow balls. I am so mad at Laurita. This whole story makes my heart ache, and I nearly had a heart attack thinking you were going to end the story with them NOT getting together when you were getting philosophical and shit.
supersopa chapter 29 . 3/2/2013
I love this story. Although at the beginning it was a little messy and confusing. But this is a new plot, how they broke up because they love each other too much. In the middle was a little messy in the sense that it was jumped around abit too much. But generally I get the flow and gist of it. It's a beautiful story and I won't want you to rush through it as well. It is important for them to learn how to love each other w/o hurting the other party. Initially I thought you'd pair rick and summer together and laurita and dante. I guess it would work too, they loved each so much, yet their coexistence is deadly, but perhaps if they move on, they are understand how to love others better. Besides you said dante love laurita. Sometimes dante is abit selfish, rightfully so, but still, because he fell in love with another girl, yet didn't want summer to move on, and hates rick due to his involvement with summer. I do feel that rick would be a good partner for summer though. He can help her heal. The issue with summer and dante is so intertwined that they moved on, yet are unable to truly move on from each other. I'm interested to read what you have in store from them 4 next. Also, the deal with kari and nicolette.
round and round we go chapter 29 . 3/2/2013
I just- this is so wonderful, you know? You must know, you wrote it. Anyway, this story is so amazing and beautiful that I honestly don't know what else I should say. And the interaction with the two main characters; I'll admit, they got me confused a fair share of times, but the whole fragility of them is fascinating to read about. This is a great story and I am so happy to have found it. Please update soon!
S chapter 29 . 3/1/2013
I just love your story :)
and I know Cassidy and Dante are meant and all that but I'd still like to see her with Rick-at least for a little while. Just a suggestion, since Rick is such a cool guy!
and I'm, at least, liking all this drama. hope there's more to come! Funny how Cassidy thought she wasn't the protagonist in this story :P
S chapter 20 . 2/28/2013
This is going to sound a bit random but I feel like there should be a diffference in how much they've gotten over each other. Cassidy used her strength, which she'll always have but Dante had Laurita's help. He's holding onto her even when she isn't there.
Anyway, greaaat story!
loveofallthatisawesome chapter 29 . 2/27/2013
This was amazing! Oh my gosh, my heart is breaking. I know there is a lot of time between updates, but as soon as I started reading this, it was as if I had never stopped reading to begin with.

I thought this chapter had the perfect amount of drama. It was very playful at the beginning with Rick and Cassidy and I loved that. They were cute. But the scene with Laurita was perfect. It was absolutely perfect.

Wow. I hate Laurita. Oh God, I hate her now, so much. Dante should not love her! She's a manipulative liar. Ahhh, I really want you to update now. Like, even if it's just the next chapter. I want to know what Dante wanted to talk to her about. I want to know everything!

Anyway, I think Dante doesn't love Laurita as much as he does Cassidy. Cassidy's it for him.
Hop3lesS-Romantic-GirL chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
OMG! I am absolutely IN LOVE with this story. I spent my whole day reading it and literally can't wait for the next chapter! I don't really wish for your story to end. The characters seem so real and I as reader went could feel all their emotions while reading as well! Good work! Please PM as to when the next chapter will be out hun..

XoX
Wolflover08 chapter 29 . 2/26/2013
Laurita is an idiot. I strongly dislike her, you just don't DO that to someone, especially Dante. That's terrible. I don't care if he was broken or whatever, you just DO NOT FREAKING DO THAT. I hope Cassidy tells him what happened because that is messed up. Love your story!
FeatherfooD chapter 29 . 2/21/2013
...I just want to strangle them both. And that pretty much sums up my feelings about this chapter. Just...UGH! lol
AbbeyXD chapter 29 . 2/21/2013
I'm really confused. So Dante loves her and she loves Dante but where does Laurita come into all of this?
Even though I love this story, I feel like it gets really confusing at times and that the characters some how end up making things more difficult for themselves :) but I hope you update soon!
Reena chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
Now I just want Cassidy to have her second chance at love argh everything's been so sad for her...I like Rick but I still favor Dante more than Cassidy and Dante have is exquisite ppl hardly find their soulmate's and I hope they don't lose that over some accident caused in their past:(
Lindsay Hawk chapter 29 . 2/19/2013
I loved the update! I know it may take a while to post new chapters, but it is ALWAYS worth the wait.
beth chapter 29 . 2/18/2013
So in love with this story! It's my favourite on fictionpress. I absolutely love Cassidy and Dante's relationship, would love some more interacting between them in the next chapter. And oh man, Laurita.. what a bitch lol.

Please update real soon?! Xx
beth chapter 29 . 2/18/2013
LOVE IT
would love some more interaction between dante and cassidy in the next chapter!
and oh man laurita.. what a bitch lol.

please update soooon! xxx
EireGal chapter 29 . 2/18/2013
Just done a mammoth 29ch read from start to finish. Really a 7 year story lol. I liked the style and content but at times felt you rambled on a bit - sorry not very specific-. This last chapter I very much enjoyed, very tense and bitchy. I do hope you can tie up the lose ends of secondary characters before you finish.
Please update
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