Reviews for Brown Eyes
Jugglingbearperformer chapter 14 . 9/7/2006
Oh what did happen..I emean is she gonna remember? Oh PLEASE update soon...:D
duckiie chapter 14 . 9/7/2006
so like what happend to her? was she raped? did Dante come in time? what happend that day?
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 14 . 9/7/2006
huh?wth that was a huge turn

did she get raped?u shud make it like thatthats so dramatic and cliche
TwinkleHeart chapter 14 . 9/6/2006
make them kiss D
yonderwindow chapter 14 . 9/6/2006
wow she doesnt remember anything? woahh, update soon so i can find out whats next! :D
megamegaturtle chapter 14 . 9/6/2006
What is up with everyone? Well, keep up the good work!
bex17 chapter 14 . 9/6/2006
school started yesterday. I'm depressed. update soon. heh. :)
omaterluna chapter 14 . 9/6/2006
goshdarnit. i wanna know what happened to CAsidy. I try to imagine what MIGHT have happened, but i'm not likeing any of the ideas. anywyas great chapter lol xD
loveSZbrownie chapter 14 . 9/6/2006
aw...he must really care for her in some parts. The only that bothers me is the swearing, but i guess it's your story...and is the bit about going to be revealed?
angels and effects chapter 14 . 9/5/2006
Hmph, you write too well. Hahaha! Interesting, Cassidy doesn't remember anything about the attack... that People's Magazine thing was fab XD Cassidy better watch out for death threats!

Oh, femmevia here, just so you know, I changed my pen name! Great chapter, update soon! School sucks huh?
daretobe-dIfFeRnT chapter 14 . 9/5/2006
ah ur killing me! i was so frustrated reading it cause i wanna know what happened to her! but thats not a bad thing! ur keeping the readers attention(especially mine!) and they just keep wanting more(like me!) so good job! i couldnt help but think it was a filler chapter though, not much happened besides them going back home. but i suppose thats something rather big... eh whatever, it was good:D oh but one complaint, there were too many "what not"'s, it kinda got irritating. maybe if u got rid of 2 of them or something u wont notice them as much:) k try to update soon!
FamousOneLiners chapter 14 . 9/5/2006
super cute.
chic rebel chapter 14 . 9/5/2006
i really want to see what happens next so i hope you update sooner. i know you have school but i hope maybe you can satisfy my hunger for this story. :D
tootles chapter 13 . 9/4/2006
hey that was AWESOME! you have to up-date son! suggestion- why dont you put it in dante's point of fiew for alittle you dont have to just a suggestion or mabey you could have him find her or something lol UPDATE SON!
wookie penn chapter 13 . 9/2/2006
:O my god this story is amazing! plz update soon
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