|Reviews for Brown Eyes|
| eve-maiden chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
:O holy crap! whats with that guy? jelous much? stalkerish even? i'm a little confused... i'm assuming that the him that guy is refering to is Dante but i dont understand why he's so possesive... update soon! did she get stabbed did he leave after that did he kidnap her? what happens next! argh! lol update soon!
| CynicalValentine98 chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
You have to update really fast. I want to know what the deal with this guy is.
| vimaro22 chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
That was exciting. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
| rina chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
dude, she got stabbed? who the hell is that guy? i totally forgot about him too. i can't believe she got stabbed. i thought for sure you would put dante into that part and rescue her or something.
| Lady Wolfine chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
Dante needs to come along and play the knight in shining armor. And creepo-dude is talking about Dante for some unknown reason? Yea? Nay?
Oh, and I loved Cassidy's interpretation of the script. Quite funny.
| Cocoa Jamboree chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
Gah, cliffie. I love love LOVE your story! And let me tell you, I am a VERY picky person. But seriously, I think that someday you should look into getting this published. I would buy it in a heartbeat. I'm just itching to know what happens next, and ESPECIALLY what happened in the past with Dante and Cassidy. Definitely favorited! Keep up the great work!
| Infinite Abyss chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
Great chapter but that was a very evil cliffhanger. Update soon.
| CuteButPshycho27 chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
Oh, do update soon! Like very soon. You're updates are already very fast, but, with this chappie out, update faster! no pressure though :p
A few grammar mistakes, but meh, doesn't really matter.
| Nghi chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
I laughed so hard when Cassidy was like, "Jasmine." And then she started laughing about how gullible Ace was. That was my highlight. And Anderson sounds interesting. You haven't given him the usual paragraph of his description, which is bloody fantastic because I feel like I've fallen in love with his character. XD Just another good example of how romances CAN be pulled off without the standard physical description. Usually I don't read these types of stories because they end up incredibly boring in the future, so I'm going to pray that this doesn't end in the same fate. It sounds pretty interesting so far, for real!-Nghi
| Saniaaa chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
woah! that was guy is a pyscho. i really like this chappie except for the last bit. hmm, what's with Dante giving Cass wierd looks? & Seth seemed like a good guy but after that girl Jesse. not so much. neway update soon.
| yonderwindow chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
OMG. WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING LEAVING US ON SUCH A HORRIBLE CLIFFHANGER? YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON! (great chap btw)
| alakazam05 chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
I hope Dante would feel guilty for neglecting to give Cassidy a free and way safer ride home from school! Argh! Even if he's hot, he can be such a jerk! I'm having a Cassidy moment right now...
| pixxidust chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
very nice chapter! the only thing I would recommend is when things are serious, like when she's with the silver-eyed guy, cut back on the funny remarks. like when she says she knows the true meaning of fear, 'which totally sucks, by the way,' that kind of lightens the situation. but otherwise very nice. I look forward to your next chapter.
| aish chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
oo! who is the guy with the silver eyes!hope u update soon!i love this story!)
| iiHEARTyuu chapter 13 . 8/24/2006
omgsh ..i like this story ..its cute ..but im confused !er .. is that the point of the sotryline ?cause were not supposed to know about their past ayye ?and what about the silver eyed guy ..hes scary .. and random manns ..where did he come from ?why do they hate each other so much ?and what was vix talking about the last time they were in the papers or whatever ..im guessing youre not goning to answer these questions ..cos it will probably kill the story ..but just thought ide ask .. )well update soon ..laters ..xoxo