|Reviews for Broken Starfish|
| LadyNayanda chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
that is an INCREDIBLE poem. your symbolism is amazing and you dictate your thoughts and feelings perfectly. great job. i love it.
| Freed by Mercy chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
I understand your pain. But with this discovery can come hope, come healing. Get the professional help you need. Don't delay. Psychotherapy and the right medication helps a lot.
As for your poem, I think the metaphor of the starfish says it all. My favorite part of your poem.
"I find a severed starfish.
Two arms have been cut off,
But only one is trying to grow back.
The other is stopped by a leech.
I pull off the leech to save the arm,
But too much has been taken,
And the arm dies."