Reviews for Nothing chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
"I dance upon the shadow of myself"

I really liked that line. I really liked the whole poem. It was very deep and the imagery popped right out at me.

ex oh ex

- Lacey
shynesss chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Wow...I like how you compared it to being bounded and's how I feel.
Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
i lurv the whole thang! can i just say my thoughts exactly here! i really like the symbolism in this...the other one too. but i like this one better!~(. .)~
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Several lines here I really like:"dusted cage of broken glass...I dance upon the shadow of myself...I cry for there is nothing left."

those really were touching. Beautifully written~