Reviews for White Picket Fence
LuckyCharm.698 chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Every girls dream isnt it. A poem that depicts wat romace an desire hopefully lead up 2. I liked it!
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
The sweetest dream two people could have, to want to spend the rest of their lives together. I really hope that this works out for you, you deserve this. Great job.
You Make Me Smile A Lot chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
That was great. I don't really like romantic things, but this was an acception. P.s. Tanx for reviewing my poem_
J.STEWART chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
Hey, I'm back.

I really like this poem. It's so sincere and heartfelt. Glad to have read this.
Clayfoot chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
i haven't been on in awhile...hope you remember me. this poem is quite beautiful. really does a good heart-string-pulling.
arcane devices chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Long, descriptive and sweet. I'm short of words. Nicely done. I look forward to your next update. - ADD-san
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
Great flow to this. I don't think it's as "little house on the prarie" as a first reading would have it seem though - "dirty little secret" and seeing her through the window? Hm...dunno, but that may just be me reading too much into it.
Herminia chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
Aww! This is so sweet.
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Very sweet. Beautifully written, I could imagin it all in my mind.

Keep it up.
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
wow suprise ending twist, i like it! very cute and romantic P
Tenel Ka Djo chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Aw! That was cute. The last line really tied it all together well.