Reviews for Grave of My Thoughts
Tikklz chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Hmm... really interesting. The more I think about this poem, the more I like it. I love the irony of the last two lines.
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
people do strange things for the ones they care about..this poem sums it up perfectly..
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Cool. I like this.
hanfiddle chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Grave thoughts indeed, and well bent into words that haunt.
I.O.K.O chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
I hope they don't die. They'll stop making good poems if they do.
trash can art chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
I liked the vindictive tone you used. I could practically feel the venom in the last line.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
grave of thoughts - i wish my thoughts would just go the grave already. i guess some things never die. nice work with this poem.
peppermintswirl962 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
very deep and... um i dont know how to describe its just wonderful work! Keep it up!
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Powerful poem, very well written. Good job! Vx
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
I really enjoyed reading this. The ending was excellent. I love the candor of it. It made the line pack a powerful punch. Keep up the good work.