|Reviews for When Heero gets mad|
| Haiku Police chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
NOT a haiku. Try 5-7-5
| Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
| Lady Death Cat chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
a few things.
1. this is a good poem but
2. it's not a haiku.
A haiku is three sentences.
The first sentence has FIVE SYLABLES
like hell-o mom and dad thats five sylables.
'You better run you better hide' has
cause when Herro gets mad is six sylables.
Your gonna die is four sylables.
Far away from the syabble count for a haiku.
It's supposed to be 5-7-5
Hope this doesn't offend you.
Lots of luck
Lady Death Cat
| Ralena chapter 1 . 4/25/2002
::Booo Hoooo Hoooo::((laughing so hard I am crying)) ::Sad, but true. VERY TRUE:: Nice make some more up just for me. Bye
| Black Bunny chapter 1 . 12/19/2001
*keeps laughing and laughing* funny but true thought.
| Shang Hai chapter 1 . 11/29/2001
This was very good... (Laughs) This is the first review I've writen... but... This really deserved it! So very true!
| taurean jade chapter 1 . 3/9/2001
very funny but so true so true
| Aiji Yuywell chapter 1 . 3/5/2001
YEAH MYLIA! another very well put together poem by the master *bows at Mylia's feet* you ROCK at poetry of ALL kinds