Reviews for Dieing of Existence
Nemonus chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
I really like the title and the last line (them being the same...) but this comes off as more of a 'no one knows that i exist' simple work than what that title evokes for me. I do like "And if I am one will correct me", because the narrator wants even that acknowledgement. I don't know that I'd call it dieing of existence though, but rather, dieing of lack of attention.
vampiric-happenings chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
i like this very much! i can relate to this greatly! very good...full of emotion! i love it! nice work!:D
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
i like this! very good, thank you for the reviews
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
This was really cool! I liked this one!
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
[ its a good poem but sad to its meaning...::sniffles::
beatrice is hot chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
You spelled "dying" wrong.
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Sad, sad, sad!
BlueWolfGirl chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
I kept my word that I would review people back if they reviewed fallen so here I am. I liked it and the emotion was there.
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
I would care...good poem,thought,very sad...
ladybugpoet chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
so much pain drips from the words.. emotion... i adore
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
sp dieing should be dying I believe... nice poem
summer-rainfall chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
i loved it, very angst