|Reviews for Tsubasa Reverse|
| miss understanding chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
I like your style. It's descriptive without tacking on a whole lot of pointless details that aren't important. You maintain a delicate balance here, which I like.
Dialogue flows smoothly, and matches with the characters' rank and upbringing. Although, so far they all appear to be upper-class and educated, so I suppose I'll have to reevaluate after I see some peasants talk. _
I like the names, too. I, personally, am quite bad at making up names. Felimgrad sticks out and you can tell it's completely original.
Well, ciao for now!
| Adaku chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
Hm...well this is better than mine, that's for sure. Your made up names are really cool-nice work. Keep up the great work. Till next time
| incandescente chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
i loved the surprise ending at the end. just who was the stranger? hope to know of it soon. :) however, do take note of juxtapositions in your writing; how can the soldiers' voices be clear when they're weeping? wouldn't their voices crack or something? do continue writing! :)