I see a train slowly speeding up and moving faster and faster progressively as this piece moves on. Dissatisfaction with yourself is what I hear also. I worry for you... You are one of my best friends and bandmates, so you are, in a way, a part of my family.

~Love, Ayaerhis

P.S. My new e-mail is on my profile; contact me.

Ooh la la. I really enjoy the message, but I REALLY enjoy the format. It's neither poetry nor philosophy (or is it that it's both?) It's neither grammatically correct nor wrong (or again, is it both?). There is only one category I can think of that it falls in completely, and that is Greatness. You have an amazing talent, even during a bout of Writers Block you're still awe-inspiring. Keep it up, please. (and tell me when you post new stuff on FP) :)

-Dallas

i like the fluid thought

alot of people dont"there arent any periods" blah blah blah

kudos

live on the edge