Reviews for Under The Summer Rain
vcdwhite chapter 17 . 8/22/2013
I liked the story... before it got to the ending. You have a knack for killing your characters when you can't figure out a way for their lives to continue. I mean you killed knives for no reason other than probably a broken heart. You left riley's relationships hanging with no real conclusions. And you kept pushing chris and riley's relationship even though from the prev story a closure has already been made, I think. I would have been overjoyed to read that kowa and riley ended up together. But anyway I guess life's a bitch. What happened to leon and alex?
Rae Simmons chapter 3 . 11/26/2008
Ok, ok. Please, please, please, please please! Let me use this chapter title for a monologue I'm doing for theater. Please? I'll luff you for ever and ever? Please?
angel953 chapter 17 . 4/13/2007
whha okay im REALLY pathetic because im crying my eyes out over this story! and hey what happened to naming dru's baby after riles and chris and hazel? just a thought...why must you kill them of why? great story you really made me feel like i was a part of it...kinda left us on a cliffhanger with the whole kowa thing gosh i loved how he and riley worked soo well together...they were pretty dammed y too great as always 5 billion stars go out to this story! bravo hope for a third one but will read the rest of your stuff soon
angel953 chapter 15 . 4/13/2007
okay now im kinda annoyed at chris i want kowa and riley together gosh i contradict myself a lot (i wanted riley and chris for the longest time and i d kowa gosh now its the other way around!) geat job as always
angel953 chapter 14 . 4/13/2007
AH totally loved the beginning of this chapter...not so hott for the ending though...great job
angel953 chapter 13 . 4/13/2007
oh boy this is really like hott now...i like it...please don't leave us hanging in the next chapter...please i beg of youu...
angel953 chapter 12 . 4/13/2007
favorite character: tie between riley chris shadow and mere i know thats like most of them but i love them al

steamy scene: mere and riley

dont think atticus should be brought back in well maybe as a side person but not as important as before...

dont miss Matt and Ericka AT ALL i dont like the two of them they cuased riley pain (aw poor riley) definately miss jag and dru though

dont know the answer to the last question sorry
angel953 chapter 11 . 4/13/2007
oh kowa gettin fiesty! lol quite dirty i must add lolz i do feel as though i know these people i think i read a little bit too much im becoming totally obssessed. ah sorry had a spaz moment there great as always you should really think about trying to get this published i would so buy it!
angel953 chapter 10 . 4/13/2007
"Gackt" you know...every time i read this in something you have written it honestly reminds me of somone gagging because the way it spells and well yea...anyways i am totally obssedd with this story and i feel so bad for kowa and riley to but well ya as always i love your writing.
angel953 chapter 9 . 4/13/2007
I love this story! Eep(sorry after reading all this writing of yours i have started writing/saying that lolz) asalways i love this and i had kinda figured that the thing with kowa had suttin to do with his past...this shadow guy sounds pretty dammed hott! lol great as always
angel953 chapter 8 . 4/12/2007

you ARE great at what you do with these stories...oh and uh tell the Kowa muse to shut the heck up because i wana know more about the shad/mere thing here. i hope they do something...(stares into space thinking about it)...what? oh sorry back to the review! great job on tis chapter

as always i love your work and totally wish that i could write this should try to get this stuff published ya know? you are so great at this!
angel953 chapter 7 . 4/12/2007
You go places A LOT lol great chapter i soo knew that kiss was coming!
angel953 chapter 6 . 4/12/2007
“OMG, Rover, this tree’s wood is GROWING!” hahaha love this line totally get it cuz it happened to my friend today at school and he had to give an oral report today infront of the like evilist teacher in the whole school...quite funny actually
angel953 chapter 4 . 4/12/2007
Hm...I like this...when you leave it like this i begin to wonder what will happen when i get to the next makes me wonder if this is going to be someone "special" to Riley? hm oh well guess i should get back to the story...
angel953 chapter 2 . 4/12/2007
AAh so I was wrong about the "he" it was kowa. i don't see how he never gets that dammed noose stuck in like a door or something...i don't really like his character all that much so maybe i'm just wondering that because im hoping it? anyways great job and i will have to read that thing with the rest of the gang andwhat hapened over the summer. i MUST catch up on their lives! lol i have become totally obsessed with your work...especially this lively bunch! D i feel as though i know them and that they are all my friends...i laugh when they laugh and cry when they me that's what makes a story god and truly worth reading i love that in a story! great job and keep going with all this great stuff you write!
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