Reviews for Daisy
Moretta chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
Ah, cute. I know it's not quite the reaction you were expecting, but I can see this little girl in my head, not quite knowing what love is, picking petals off a daisy while reciting.

She doesn't know what it means, not really, but she's still devastated when she gets to the last petal, because she's been told that love is something big, something beautiful, something important, and now she's being denied this fairytale ending that she's read about, seen in films, heard her mother talk about.

It's a lot. Especially at 11.

All this to say that I liked it. Truly.
sophia-c chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
It's so simple yet amazing. I'm sure any girl can relate to this poem and that's what I love about it. I am so favoring this RIGHT NOW ]
CandleQueen chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
This poem makes me imagine a teenage girl thinking about someone who's never noticed her before. The symbolism of the flower petals really gets the meaning across well. Definitely another fav.

-Ramen
pandorka42 chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Awe- that's so cute! Definitely going on my favorites list. ;)
Leaving Here chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
hehe! i love it! amazing!

and... harry potter owns my soul, too.

and... i joined the ficpress myspace group... under Lizz...

kk-~Liz
RAVEN-6666 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
Simply Beautiful...
pinkishfish chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
This is wonderful. I love it.
drippingdreams chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
Cute, simplistic. Eleven year old emotions. I like it. Captures the moment and the feelings very succinctly. Cheers. :)
amoonda chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
dude. devin you are a very cool girl. not to mention very poetic and talented. who is that poem about?

(oh and btw its amanda marshall)

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