Reviews for Still
magnusthewolf chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
i loved this. great job :)
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
I agree with the greymalkin, you didn't need the typography. But the poem itself was infinitely elequent and rather sad. Overall I liked it.

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sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
I love the thought being expressed here. It’s endearing and beautiful and sad all at once. However, I don’t think the typography did anything for you here. You don’t need the bold or italics or the periods. They detract from the elegant simplicity of this poem.
lunasparks chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
It is a rather quiet (and pretty) poem.. I don't think you need to bold the last word, because its so much more..powerful in its simplicity. The whole poem is, really. Good stuff.