Reviews for I Would Ask Forgiveness
SaRmelLexia chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
aw it's very sweet...

Lots of Love, hugs n Kisses
WrongSeason-for-Dreams chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Wow I love that poem. It's amazing, the top half reminds me of my sister. I've always tried to write something like this and never been able to but you did it perfectly. Magnificent.
i am myself chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
wow... this is amazing... i can feel the power and meaning and strength of your feelings through these words... great job...
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
Powerful, painful stuff. Good work.
Prevaricate chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
this, to me, goes from sounding almost childish to entirely more mature by the end; goes along with the narrator's changing opinion, her own growth.

also, "I don't want to toddle in your wake." while referring to a young child. A toddler. toddle, toddler... wonderful word usage.