Reviews for The Phil and Lauren Story
Nastrond chapter 8 . 2/27/2008
It was all a dream? was getting good too. Oh well, good job, I really enjoyed it.
tears of emerald chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
hilarious! A kids parents leave to heaven-only-knows-where, and then she end up stuck with some really irresponsible parents? Poor thing!
saber-toothed jellybean chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
Yes... funny/weird/interesting fits the bill. I am totally cluless as to what is going on! lol!

running spring rain chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
'tis... interesting.

I know it's not supposed to make sense, but if you put a bit more dialogue between the real parents and their children about why they're leaving (you can even put an absurd reason in there...! have fun with it!), then it would make the story a lot more coherent. Not necessarily make sense :) but it would make it flow a bit more.

Happy writing!