Reviews for We Bled for Independence
faery tragedy chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
I like your storytelling abilities here; you write with a kind of old world charm. Your style reminds me of Upton Sinclair, strangely enough, though the subject matter's different. I'd suggest breaking up the paragraphs to make it a little easier on your readers though :). *faery tragedy
Great-Enchantress chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
Sounds like a good start to me, make sure it doesn't get too text-booky. I usually try to stay away from statistics and exact dates. So instead of 1854 for example, maybe put the mid 1850's. I know it might not seem like such a drastic change, but it is a more personal touch and that can make all the difference. I am interested to see the real "storyline" to this story, and meet the characters. Looking forward to more,

-Great-Enchantress