I'm still in awwing mode from your last poem i read. I'm a smart one indeed eh? Well, anyways... this was good too... haha *puts you on fav author & author alert list*

TAD

ooh very good , sounds like you could possiably use this for a story as a phrophecey of sorts .

Please R&R my story Frog's ,Warts & Kisses in return .

Great Poem! I love the way you managed to keep it half and half- half good half bad. Half chaos half order. Its almost symeterical. Well done! Keep it up. You must be a VERY talented writer...**BOOKWORM**

Very interesting piece. I like the repeating stanzas. . pulls it together nicely. meg

Great symmetry in this. You keep everything half and half as well as keep the idea of chaos... The extremes from dark to light a constant throughout... I really loved this. Great job.