Reviews for Flatlining
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
As usual, you have put together two different ideas but somehow make them relate to each other perfectly. The analogy in your powm saddens me. Take care.

McKenzie Drestire chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
This would make a good song, as a poem it's a wasted and i felt like i was reading song lyrics. Loved the rhepitioon of 'i'm flatlining' can really tell there's a story underneath the images and idea of a heartattack putting the poem into flow. Really liked the last few lines and especially the end 'even if it flatlines me', very abrupt and final, just like a heartattack.

Peace out, kenzie