Reviews for Tightrope Snapping Threadbare
Aquafied chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
i follow all but purple devastation. what is it?

the darkest valleys are theones left uncultivated,-is that too true?
arcane devices chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Beautiful, as always. I enjoyed the longevity and the complexity of this piece. I look forward to your next update. - ADD-san
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
wow, i love how this poem seem to pour out to you, overwhelming and making you almost humble. great job

keep writing
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Expertly written, how long did this take you?

Where do you get your ideas/inspiration?
b-U-b-TRUE chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
This is written with a very intense tone and has a very dramatic mood to it, because you have raised the stakes through your use of metaphores and description the reader becomes very captivated! Great work!
eldrin chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
Intense and carefully stumbling. A very strong piece.
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
What a painful and raw piece. The rambling feel gives us a sense of mindset. Tough stuff to write, tough stuff to live through, thank you for the reminder. Good work.