Reviews for Conclusions
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
This is really sad, but it happens sometimes. So true..

LOVE IT!
Frore chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
Aww...

Simple and sad. Definitely not a bad piece at all.
Lady-Poeticro chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
simple but yet meaningful! i liked this! keep writing!
Sakura Taking chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
This is a great read. The deep emotions are very well expressed. Nice work.
Hardtoremember chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
i love the repetition of 'in conclusion', it gives it a certain style within the poem that makes the reader hold on until the end. some of the phrases you use are just beautiful 'breaking dawn, fading night'.loved work.
Emmytastic gal chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
this is really awesome. Your choice of words is perfect, and the format is amazing. great great great work.

write on,

-Em
PM20 chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
I like the poem, but I think I like how it is written even more. The way the stanzas are broken up and the way certains words are stretched or italicized. It really helps to enhance the poem. Great work and thanks for sharing.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
I like this.. so bittersweet and beautifull... love the ending
plummet chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
-sigh- The pain of heartbreak. Curse its strengthening powers.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Very poignant and relatable. The emotion in this is raw and true and sincere, which makes this a great read. Well done.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
it seems like that happens to much.

do you ever realize, we keep more secrets than we know?
mezzie chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
sometimes they care, but they just don't care enough...

mezzie :(
toxic-noodle725 chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
aww that was sad but beautifully written. well done!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
Stunning poem. I can completely relate. Excellent work as always. Keep writing!

Anna _
Hannah Rose Williams chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Wow. There were a lot of vivid pictures in this. Beautiful work.
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