|Reviews for Destiny II|
| DecemberOfDying chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Nice revision. It says basically the same thing, but it can be precieved as something different. I like it! Awesome job.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
The entire thing doesn't make sense because saying "heaven made him" doesn't assert how that is supposed to be. Then it become "a great deal worse" - worse compared to what? worse than "heaven made him"? isn't everyone made from "heaven" and good or bad according to their nature (or nurture, but that is a different issue)? Well, I am making poor effort to convey my confusion, but perhaps you have the gist of it. It seems the haiku is an unequal comparison.
| Raymond Lamar Gilstrap chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
I've never read a haiku before so I thought I would check yours out and I have to say that they are pretty short poems which means you have to get straight to the point which you did here with this haiku. Fabulous poem and so very true. And thanks for reading Alpha and Omega and I will read more of your haikus later.
Until Next Time . . . .
| just dani chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
very ture...i mean ur totally stating the obvious, but its not a bad thing here. i like this