|Reviews for Mismatch|
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
The last line seems out of place - more specifically the use of "sunset" - what is its significance? Why "sunset" instead of something else? I am not sure what you are trying to tell me - I shall ponder.
| moonsliver86 chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
haunting... keep it up; keep writing...
| I.O.K.O chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Kind of makes a person think. That's what I like about haikus. They can go in all sorts of directions.
| Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Cool. I like this.