Reviews for James
ossining chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
What a wonderful piece of fiction. Some of the details in this - about what Anna was wearing when James met her and the sunburn on her leg - really make this story nice. There's a lot that could be expanded on if you wanted to make this a full-length piece, such as Anna's relationships with her mother and sister, since they're hinted at in here. I think maybe since this piece is about James, you could have focused a little more on Anna's relationship with him, but it's still a great piece regardless. Keep writing! :)