|Reviews for New Prayer|
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Not one of my favourites, but good all the same. Keep up the good work!Rowan
| NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
beautiful...suffices. I loved this poem in every aspect and it reminds me of prayer I once prayed...lol...anyway wonderful job.
| The Postscript chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
Wonderful, I love the connection with the sunset and "depths of the stars". Amazing images and clarity. Beautiful. Keep writing and God bless, s.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Lovely! Keep up the awesome work. God Bless ya!
| Freed by Mercy chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
"I want You to go unnoticed by few"
This line , and the line about Mars don't work well. For the last line try something like:"I want your light to shine true"
As for the rhyme for stars, try rhymezone or another internet rhyming dictionary for ideas. The Mars lie screams: I rhyme! yippee! You don't want to do that.
Otherwise, it's a good poem. You're almost there...
| anon chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
i love this poem, well written