Reviews for Remnants
watercolour dreams chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Wow. Very powerful. I was completely absorbed reading this. Nice work! The most powerful part to me has to be:

"I still see the scars/in the once-divided city,/trying to become whole again/now that no wall keeps it in pieces."

Amazing. This was amazing. It definitely portrays the aftermath and continuous scars from the Berlin Wall. Nice work!
Icyfire4w5 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Wow, this poem is marvellous! I think that some cities have really turbulent histories, so they give off sad vibes.
LiL PiNk 9o chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
I like it very much. I would like to see Berlin some day.
Crymson Tears chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
erm...what does the last line say? i know it's WARNING!...west berlin, but could you email me with the translation? i feel like a dumkoph..darn. danke!
Alyosha Karamazov chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
wow. I would love to see the things you described so beautifully.