|Reviews for Wine|
| Peridot Tears chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Nice wording and usage! It all just fits in so well!
| miss understanding chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
Why does it always burn when it goes down? That's so strange. Makes ya wonder why people started drinking it in the first place.
People often refer to wine as something to "help them forget" and it fits nicely in your poem.
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
like the idea and description you have about wine.
| ygg chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
I really like this description.. especially the last line which is hauntingly true. Good work!
| moonsliver86 chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
how so very true; i liked how you described wine; i liked your haiku - keep writing.