Reviews for karma
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Amazing metaphor, it was awesome because it's really hard to make something so nice in a haiky. Awesome!
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 3 . 11/13/2006
I like your use of color in this - grey rain and green meadows. How something so bland can make something else so beautiful. Just very nice work. Keep writing! :)
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 2 . 11/13/2006
Oh, and this is nice, too, because it has a completely different feel to it than the first poem. I see someone stranded at sea during a massive storm. It's very beautiful, this picture you've created. Keep writing! :)
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
Use of an exclamation point in a haiku - that's pretty impressive. Though I was told that if I wanted to read really good haikus, I should read yours. And hey, does not disappoint. Such interesting language in this. I love the idea of weeds being "reborn," and instead of by rain, it's "heaven's cold tears." Very nice poem. Keep writing! :)
Moondog Dozier chapter 2 . 9/9/2006
Very visual, and mystical. Quite thought provoking. Great haiku.
bipedalcooney chapter 2 . 9/1/2006
Nice haiku, very nicely written.
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Nicely written, I like your wording.
granada chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
very unexpected, thought-provoking
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
This really speaks to me. Very specific and yet openly haunting. A favorite. Marvelous haiku.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
So powerful and enlightening.
Countess Chocula chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
beautiful. I'm favoriting this.
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Nicely written, I liked the fast paced feel to it.
stuffisawesome chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
I like this a lot. Going through a weed problem myself. ;)

BTW, thanks for reviewing my haiku. :D
verifyme chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
Oh how my mom hates weeds. WOnderful poem.